Willow
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Sharks
Waken
The Power of One
710 words
Comments: One man teams, observations and perceptions. Could have done with some added flair but a well written piece.
Score: 80
Marc Herbert [CNTDN]
My Degree
750 words
Comments: A good foundation to start with and spot-on with some assessments. It meandered a bit but the spelling errors (including a players name, US spelling and actual spelling errors) were a little too numerous to go without notice.
Score: 79
Dread
Will the Sharks ever win a comp?
685 words
Comments: A difficult topic for fans to tackle when looking for answers. The author delivered a few home truths from the heart but did so in a concise and reasonable manner.
Score: 90
glockers*
Form Guide for Dummies
758 words
Comments: Form guide with the tongue firmly planted in the cheek.
NB: author should use the official F7s word counter in future essays as it may differ from MS Word.
Score: 88 minus 2 points word count penalty
Score: 86
griffo346
REFEREES; WHY CANT THEY BE CONSISTANT
450 words
Comments: Ref consistency or lack of - a question asked every weekend and well appreciated by fans and commentators alike. Essay was a little underdone rushed perhaps. A little more research may have helped to elaborate the point. Spelling and other errors (such as two different spellings of a referees surname) didnt help the cause.
Score: 69
TOTAL SHARKS: 404
Eels
Bubbles
The Big Top
749 words
Comments: Another in-depth analysis of a teams performance and from a different angle. Great metaphors and comparisons that didnt miss the mark.
Score: 90
blackfriday*
FAIRYTALES: FALSE HOPE OR A NEW BEGINNING?
692 words
Comments: Good analysis of the difficulty facing premiers in trying to back up the following year.
Score: 87
eloquentEEL
Who the hell is Jay Jay?
743 words
Comments: Very well researched tribute to the JJ Giltinan Shield and the man it was named after.
Score: 90
Goleel
Best Friends Forever?
749 words
Comments: A cutting caricature of the relationship between Parramatta and Jamie Lyon. Nicely written and an original approach.
Score: 85
Bartman
The quest for success
750 words
Comments: Well written and the difficulty level of the subject matter gained a few points. Maybe a tad over engineered in places.
Score: 83
TOTAL EELS: 435
EELS 435 DEFEAT SHARKS 404
Players Of The Match (POTM):
Dread (Sharks), Bubbles (Eels), eloquentEEL (Eels)
*NB: Players are asked to nominate their team before posting. Thanks.
Congrats to captains and players. Well played everyone.