Rabbitohs
vippo19
You have to watch the match
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80
Clevo
Totally absurd. Please dont give this story to me again.
84
PQ
Who are these people ? Scattered and presumptive, but cute descriptions.
82
Pistol
Fair attempt at an engine room analogy.
78
no. 2_lukeburt
Muddy and confusing expression of what may have been interesting with editing and skill.
75
Sharks
CNTDN
Nice simple pen portrait with an eye for detail.
80
Waken
Standard comments. You really need to look at starting of sentences with phrases, prepositions or conjunctions.
78
Kryptonik
The **edit** should have been for grammar and punctuation
.. The last 3 sentences totalled (approximately) 380 garbled words [over 50% of word limit]. The message was clear but the delivery was very spotty.
65
Dread
Respect for Sludge, as well as discontent, is evident. Writing skills were average.
75
Bookie
Awkward and naive, but honest and possessing something of interest amongst relative dross.
84
Result: Rabbitohs (399) def. Sharks (382)
MOM
Clevo (84) and Bookie(84)
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