Too many syllables in each lineJesus the off season sucks
This truly is the bottom of the barrel
March can't come quick enough
Your Haiku needs workJesus the off season sucks
This truly is the bottom of the barrel
March can't come quick enough
Too many syllables in each line
LUCKILY in my life Japanese poetry doesn't play a major role...I'll do a refresher course the next time i plan a trip to the orientYour Haiku needs work
Like a Mary coached defence.
Poor lines and numbers.
It helps to learn itLUCKILY in my life Japanese poetry doesn't play a major role...I'll do a refresher course the next time i plan a trip to the orient
May good luck be yours.LUCKILY in my life Japanese poetry doesn't play a major role...I'll do a refresher course the next time i plan a trip to the orient