A Haiku tribute to Valentine Holmes

[ImTheMan]

This is my 俳句 tribute to Valentine Holmes. Please tell me what you think.

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Holmes with pace and strength,
Through the line like a gunshot...
Bang! Next immortal
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[Miller was a legend]

contact your nearest mental health centre

 

[Card Shark]

Defer the appointment, it's fine.

 

[ImTheMan]

I just enjoy a diamond in the rough.

This is why Aladdin was my favorite Disney movie as a boy.

 

[bad boy bubby]

Hahaha classic! !

 

[lolesi]

Great stuff. Would read again.

 

[shaggs]

Did someone alert reefy??

@Defer to the coifed

 

[M2D2]

Best new poster ever.

 

[southland]

I love poetry.

 

[Defer to the coifed]

Its a nice read , but the Haiku is ............average

 

[Pig Champion]

So strong at the back
Unrequited love deferred
Valentine my love

 

[Defer to the coifed]

Nice!!!

 

[Defer to the coifed]

Valentine

I am over you.
Then I see you run once more
and the dog I kick.

 

[bad boy bubby]

Valentine oh Valentine
You've come through the ranks to make up the spine
Valentine oh Valentine
Sam Schinazzi thinks you're just fine
Oh Valentine

 

[Defer to the coifed]

is that punk haiku?

 

[ImTheMan]

Okay lets try again.

The Hayne plane is lame...
Time for a new mile high club,
Be my Valentine.

 

[ImTheMan]

Cheers.

 

[Defer to the coifed]

Holmes

You left us in tears
a replacement with no gears
Benny please come holmes

 

[bad boy bubby]

is that punk haiku?

Nope. Its poetry in motion.

 

[Quigs]

I've got one me self for youse.

"Valentine oh Valinspine"
"Tis nothing that he lacks"
"Valentine, our Valinspine"
"The Vincey Farrar of the backs"