Have my vids improved?

[langpark]

Please watch them and please leave a comment, even if negative.

Me getting hit by a car (55 seconds)

Supernanny pay out (2 minutes)

and here's a mindless 30 sec vid of me falling thru a ping pong table: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MpxtrgnBpe0

 

[GC_Gladiator]

A real man would have jumped off the top step on the ladder....

Nah, the hit and run one was alot better than the previous ones i saw, and that really was because of the use of the shadows, and the stand? you placed the video on made the shot a bit better.

I think you need to do something a little more constructive, ie the falling off a ladder and getting hit by a car dont cut it for me personally.

Anyway, i am in no way a film officianado.. just offerin my opinion. Could work and keep up the improvement!

 

[langpark]

thanks heaps man, i really appreciate any feedback.

I agree with you 100% on the ladder thing, after i did it i was pist off i didn't fall from higher, wat can i say? i wussed out. Dammitt! Thanks for watching man!

 

[CC_Eagle]

Thats f*cking hilarious.

Good sh*t!

 

[langpark]

awesome! thanks heaps man!

 

[langpark]

new one just made, i called it wannabe gangsta, please have a look!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tXsP9w_vEWM

 

[A_J_Gray]

How serious are you about this or is this just a bit of fun? AS i never saw any previous ones. The getting hit by a car scene is a bit dodgy, but then you dont have all the help the big movies are.

Could that guy possible curse any more?

 

[Schillaci]

Needs more swearing and naked chicks. Otherwise they are great.

 

[langpark]

cool, thanks guys!

and to answer you question, that was my brother and he kinda regrets swearing. thanks for watchin em guys!

 

[Bastard Squad]

I just think you need to pick up the pace a bit, Hit by car maybe 30 seconds, and either 2 more examples of superdaddy in the 2 minutes, or cut it to 1 minute, each scene drags out a bit.

Sketch comedy isn't about acting, its about action.

 

[RabbitohHighlightMaker]

This thread isn't serious, is it?

 

[langpark]

I just think you need to pick up the pace a bit, Hit by car maybe 30 seconds, and either 2 more examples of superdaddy in the 2 minutes, or cut it to 1 minute, each scene drags out a bit.

Sketch comedy isn't about acting, its about action.

yep i agree with ya, there is a bit too much 'in between' stuff where the audience could get bored and easily "change the channel". cheers for the feedback!:thumb

 

[langpark]

This thread isn't serious, is it?

yea it is (kinda) man, have a look at my vids man, see wat ya think?

 

[langpark]

i literally just put my latest vid up if anyone wants to see:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6LhwtXA74AQ

it goes for less than a minute, randomest vid u'll ever see!