Are you taking about the original bombers logo, or what I've adjusted to show the jets bids could be?its crap, not appealing to children, sponsors, fans,
an old man face in an old leather helmet, give us a break. get real
I wouldn't think it'd look obviously like that, personally.Haha I almost said in my post that I would turn the plane the other way. Then I wondered whether it would look...phallic
Its not my design tho, this is the bombers bid logo.I personally think a Jets logo is a difficult brief. They’re cold, metallic objects lacking any emotion and no logo, anywhere in the world I’ve seen, capture the feeling of power and energy which is always going to be difficult in static 2D. So a pilot is a much better direction for me as it brings that obvious human element. However you’ve gone for a design that’s more reminiscent of the golden age of flight. It feels nostalgic and if that’s the look you’re going for, you nailed it but I’m not sure that’s the right fit for a club embarking on a new era. I’m not sure how kids will relate to it. Always a difficult task. What they think is cool now won’t be in five years. I know it’s a mock up and all but I think you might lose some detail if it ever went to embroidery stage or thumbnail size. The Canucks figure would reduce very well for example as the face is basically two simple shapes- forgetting the grey tone line. Great effort, though and you’re definitely capable.
Its not my design tho, this is the bombers bid logo.
There was a few folk here who just wanted to see what it could look like as the merged brisbane jets bid logo, so all i've done is change any orange/red to green and change the "Bombers" text to "Brisbane" then add jets at the bottom
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I like the logo and colors, although having a snow leopard as the mascot, you'd think theyd be a white and grey team, but as far as the patterns they've done well
This is not specifically feedback on the concept, but I don't get why there needs to be a smaller Brydens Lawyers logo above the Blues logo in addition to having Toohey's new on the front when its already on both sides. The Brydens logo would be barely visible on TV and the Tooheys New sleeve logos already would get enough visibility.
I would also put The Star logo where the Puma logo is and then put the Puma logos on the upper sleeve on both sides similar to how manufacturers do it on club jerseys. Removes the clutter from the front of the jersey.
On the back why is there a need to put The Star logo in a box? The Star also sponsor Sydney FC and they don't seem to do it on that jersey.