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My blog. Match reports, articles etc.

I bleed blue & gold

First Grade
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Hey everyone, just wondering, if anyone is interested in reading my blog, i have started to write a few articles about Parra, a season preview and match reports of the Tigers and Panthers trial matches, i will continue to write reports about all Parra's games this year and the odd extra article every now and again. If you are interested, http://scottsmatchreports.blogspot.com/


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Suitman

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Not a bad read mate. You write very well.
Can I make a suggestion though? Thanks. I'm going to anyway.
I suggest with your match reports that you put them in paragraph form.
The Tigers report looks very congested. Open it up a little and it'll be much easier to read.

Keep up the good work.

Suity
 

True EEL

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i agree i like the easy to read style you write the reports in
and although a minor point, Suity's comment is probably valid, just break it up a bit
but overall i like the idea and the way its written
 

I bleed blue & gold

First Grade
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Not a bad read mate. You write very well.
Can I make a suggestion though? Thanks. I'm going to anyway.
I suggest with your match reports that you put them in paragraph form.
The Tigers report looks very congested. Open it up a little and it'll be much easier to read.

Keep up the good work.

Suity

Thanks dude!
Yeah i should of done that, not sure why it did not cross my mind to do it in the first place, cheers for that! :D
 

PJ Marshal

Coach
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Not a bad read mate. You write very well.
Can I make a suggestion though? Thanks. I'm going to anyway.
I suggest with your match reports that you put them in paragraph form.
The Tigers report looks very congested. Open it up a little and it'll be much easier to read.

Keep up the good work.

Suity

Can i make a suggestion

shut your mouth
 

lingard

Coach
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Thanks, IBB+G. Very informative. I agree with Suitman about the paragraphing, but it`s the best account of the two games that I`ve read so far. Good on you. There`s a guy on 'that other forum' - Phil Simms, I think his name is - who does a similar thing. He writes an article on each Eels game throughout the year. He`s very good - I think he`s probably a part-time journalist. But apart from a few grammatical errors and the paragraphing, your articles were excellent. Keep it up. And, you know, the best way to learn about writing is to write. Cheers.

By the way, has Jordan Atkins signed a one year deal or a two year deal with us?
 
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I bleed blue & gold

First Grade
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Thanks, IBB+G. Very informative. I agree with Suitman about the paragraphing, but it`s the best account of the two games that I`ve read so far. Good on you. There`s a guy on 'that other forum' - Phil Simms, I think his name is - who does a similar thing. He writes an article on each Eels game throughout the year. He`s very good - I think he`s probably a part-time journalist. But apart from a few grammatical errors and the paragraphing, your articles were excellent. Keep it up. And, you know, the best way to learn about writing is to write. Cheers.

Thank you mate i appreciate that. I will have to check that guy out, ill read anything about Parra lol. Yes, i know i have a few things to work on, i appreciate people on here helping me out with them too :D, i get too excited while im writing to worry about grammer hahaha, cheers buddy!

Oh, yeah he signed on for two seasons mate :)
 
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shelve_it

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I bleed blue & gold

There is some pretty ordinanry grammar there but other that i liked it. Looks like you have plenty of time on your hands, you musn't do much for work probably a green keeper or mowe lawns :p
 

Gronk

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I bleed blue & gold

There is some pretty ordinanry grammar there but other that i liked it. Looks like you have plenty of time on your hands, you musn't do much for work probably a green keeper or mowe lawns :p

* ordinary *
* I *
* mow *
 

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