Due to time constraints, my comments will be brief.
Dragons
Johnsy with Do You Remember When? = 83
Not 100% sure where this one was going. It had an appeal but any underlying message was too clouded.
DragonPunk with Equality between the codes? = 75
Fragmentation is the key to a nicely flowing article. In some areas, you used commas instead of full stops and that impacted on the mark.
Ribs with Whats in a number? = 88
Nice flowing piece and some good insights.
JasonMaher with The Greatest Player (You've Probably Never Heard Of) = 86
Nice yarn and well constructed.
Dubopov with Panzer = 85
Good article that with a bit more formatting, would have been more presentable.
Roosters
Non Terminator with The real meaning of tragedy. = 87
A good article with good material.
melon with Amco - more than jeans. = 87
A nice trip to yesteryear and well written
adamkungl with Double Standards = 86
A good well constructed article.
Shorty (by proxy) with The Obsession With Fixing What Isn't Broken = 82
Good ideas but Id work on fragmenting your article to make it flow better
Henriete with The Real Face of Rugby League = 88
Roosters defeat the Dragons 430 417
POTM
ribs and Henriete
