My poem about trees

[chloe]

Trees

Ancient and wise, everlasting you shall stand
Bring shade to the children, drop fruit on our land
Your beauty is apparent for all to see
Trees trees

Large and small birds alike nest in you
Untamed and so wild, yet with virtue so true
The air you supply us comes with no catch, it is free
Trees trees

Loggers and bushfires, what cannot be overcome?
When there's a war to be fought you have been there and won
From the rainforests of Queensland to the woods of Tennessee
Trees trees

2005

 

[Raider_69]

its crap-tacular

 

[chloe]

My guess is you don't understand the deep inner-meaning.

 

[Twizzle]

are you a Druid Chloe ?

 

[chloe]

What is a druid?

 

[Martli]

HIPPIE

 

[chloe]

I'm thinking about entering my poem in a contest.

 

[TooheysNew]

My poem about chloe

Chloe
Is as annoying as an itchy arse,
and should leave this

Forum

Forever.
Or just get hit by a tractor.

Love Dilly.

 

[Choppies]

cut some more trees doswn Dilly neds another tea plantation :lol:

 

[chloe]

Dilmah, what is your problem with me? If you don't like my poem then don't comment. But in my eyes it's the best poem I have ever written.

 

[TooheysNew]

Says a lot. Moron.

 

[chloe]

If you are looking for a fight, go bug someone else because I am not interested. Do you have anything nice to say about my poem?

 

[TooheysNew]

Not looking for a fight, this is a forum, and on a forum you speak your opinion. In my opinion your poem is shite.

 

[*Sandy*]

I like it.

Trees are very useful.

 

[chloe]

Well I guess the last stanza could do with a little improvement.

 

[chloe]

I like it.

Trees are very useful.

Thanks PK! Nice to see someone else understands...

 

[Raider_69]

I like it.

Trees are very useful.

Thanks PK! Nice to see someone else understands...

ohh me and dilly understand alright
we understand your poem is shite

 

[Sheros los Deros]

I love your poem, Chloe. Nice rhyme, and observations on Trees trees, yes indeed.

Keep up the great writing.

 

[chloe]

Thanks Sheros. From now on I will PM you any other poems I write.

 

[Alba]

chloe top stuff imo you really should enter it in a competition ..