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Very nice
chloe said:What is a druid?
chloe said:I'm thinking about entering my poem in a contest.
madunit said:There was no suggestion in the first stanza that I was fear.
as seen in the line "The shadow of fear follows me,"
Learn to read you dimwit.
Raider_69 said:Chloe metaphorical message is that she sucks at poetry
Melstar said:Raider_69 said:Chloe metaphorical message is that she sucks at poetry
chloe, pay no attention whatsoever to Raiduh. I thought your poem was just lovely!
Exactly, the shadow OF fear. A shadow that follows someone is typically their own.madunit said:There was no suggestion in the first stanza that I was fear.
as seen in the line "The shadow of fear follows me,"
Learn to read you dimwit.
chloe said:Exactly, the shadow OF fear. A shadow that follows someone is typically their own.madunit said:There was no suggestion in the first stanza that I was fear.
as seen in the line "The shadow of fear follows me,"
Learn to read you dimwit.
You definately described yourself as fear.
madunit said:someone may have fear, that doesnt mean they are fear.
Raider_69 said:ohh come on mel, i know its not in your charactor to be mean but how can you say that pile of piss was good.
Ive thrown up sh*t when on the drink that is better that here tree tripe
Melstar said:Raider_69 said:ohh come on mel, i know its not in your charactor to be mean but how can you say that pile of piss was good.
Ive thrown up sh*t when on the drink that is better that here tree tripe
a little niceness never hurt anyone Raiduh. Why do you have to be so mean![]()
chloe said:Trees
Ancient and wise, everlasting you shall stand
Bring shade to the children, drop fruit on our land
Your beauty is apparent for all to see
Trees trees
Large and small birds alike nest in you
Untamed and so wild, yet with virtue so true
The air you supply us comes with no catch, it is free
Trees trees
Loggers and bushfires, what cannot be overcome?
When there's a war to be fought you have been there and won
From the rainforests of Queensland to the woods of Tennessee
Trees trees
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