My poem about trees

[Gene Krupa]

Bye!

:nwave:

 

[Raider_69]

I've had enough of this bullsh*t. I'm leaving.

Is that a promise?
:lol: :lol: :lol:

the streets are calling you, dont let the door hit you on the way out girl :arrow:

 

[jed]

I've had enough of this bullsh*t. I'm leaving.

Oh, now don't be like that. Be a man, stand up for yourself.

Emma's just having a bad day, she'll be your friend again tomorrow, and you can resume your romance.

 

[UndertakerMike]

This is a public forum, chloe. If you choose to post your poetry, you have to accept criticism along with adulation.

But my poems are really good and don't deserve criticism.

:lol: :lol: :lol:

Now that is truly funny.

I bet you really belive that also :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

 

[incredible_holc]

chloe dont give up, i bet people laughed at Billy Shakespear, but look how he turned out!!!! really famous and boning Gywnth

 

[Raider_69]

chloe dont give up, i bet people laughed at Billy Shakespear, but look how he turned out!!!! really famous and boning Gywnth

pfft Chloe, ill give you some sound advice
give up
you've got about as much hope a one legged man in an arse kicking contest

 

[incredible_holc]

or raider in a yr 3 end of year academic test

 

[Raider_69]

or raider in a yr 3 end of year academic test

or holc's chances of finally passing kindie this year... ie a sweet f**k all chance

 

[Gene Krupa]

or raider in a yr 3 end of year academic test

or holc's chances of finally passing kindie this year... ie a sweet f**k all chance

:lol: :lol: :lol:

 

[incredible_holc]

i actually never went to kindie, true story, i skipped it, thats why im really young for my year it sucks. Dont turn 18 till middle of this year

 

[Raider_69]

i actually never went to kindie, true story, i skipped it, thats why im really young for my year it sucks. Dont turn 18 till middle of this year

:lol:
off topic but same here
i dont turn 18 till June :x

 

[incredible_holc]

thats nothing, try f**king august

 

[Raider_69]

thats nothing, try f***ing august

ohh man that sucks
im pretty good for 18
most my mates are 20-21 this year so im used to them going out without me, like tonight (arseholes!)

they are heaps keen for me to be 18 cause they recon shits better when im there cause they know ill drink myself stupid :lol:

 

[UndertakerMike]

Ahhh Thems were the days :lol: :lol:

 

[Phillips]

i actually never went to kindie, true story, i skipped it, thats why im really young for my year it sucks. Dont turn 18 till middle of this year

:lol:
off topic but same here
i dont turn 18 till June :x

:lol: at both of you

i turn 18 in February \\/

 

[Machiavelli]

Poetry f**king shits me.

The language of the attempted artiste has become so antiquated and cliche, much like that cat shit taste in your mouth after a big night on the piss.

 

[Twizzle]

lets see you do better, or do you just pop in to diss everyone then leave again

time for you to pop off again :arrow:

 

[Machiavelli]

The Horse Poem

It’s the song not the singer,
The music not the clip,
The joke not the joker,
The horse not the horseshit.

It’s the acting not the actor,
The tune not the hit,
The love not the marriage,
The horse not the horseshit.

The building not the architect,
The justice not the writ,
The art not the artist,
The horse not the horseshit.

Its contents not the package,
The hardball not the sit,
The eyes not the smile,
The horse not the horseshit.

The horse not the horseshit.

Not only does that rhyme, its about reality, something you mob of plebians should consider participating in some time.

 

[Raider_69]

The Horse Poem

It’s the song not the singer,
The music not the clip,
The joke not the joker,
The horse not the horseshit.

It’s the acting not the actor,
The tune not the hit,
The love not the marriage,
The horse not the horseshit.

The building not the architect,
The justice not the writ,
The art not the artist,
The horse not the horseshit.

Its contents not the package,
The hardball not the sit,
The eyes not the smile,
The horse not the horseshit.

The horse not the horseshit.

Not only does that rhyme, its about reality, something you mob of plebians should consider participating in some time.

i didnt think it was possible but someone has out crapped Chloe's trees poems

 

[Machiavelli]

I didn't think it was possible, but you were the first child conceived through an arse