Lions Scores
parra_panther
RANDOM THOUGHTS
747 Words
An article that probably reflects the thoughts of fans of other clubs as well. The writer looks at the critical areas of his team and offers an opinion on them.
Score 85
Redflutterby
The toys I love…
749 Words
I was enjoying the read, when it finished so abruptly, I had to check that I hadn’t lost some when copying and pasting. This is a piece that needed a longer word count. Definitely out of the square, but a bit thin because of the word limit. Maybe just having five teams would’ve allowed a bit more detail for each team. Still “A” for originality.
Score 87
TiTTieS_[CNTDN]
The Video Referee.
746 Words
Some good thoughts on the vid ref in this one. What’s the answer? I doubt we’ll ever please everyone. The piece for me tended to get a little jumbled in the reading towards the end, none the less the writer puts forward constructive criticism.
Score86
Black Kitty
My True Love
748 Words
I found this piece a little up and down in the reading. Good story, but just misses that something to make it stand out. All about a fans introduction to the game of league. Some minor grammatical errors that weren’t penalised.
Score84
Steel Dragon
Unconditional Love, Unquestioned.
748 Words
An account of a fans love of the game. Written with obvious passion.
Score 85
Lions Total 427
Raiders Scores
Stelios Giannakopoulos (Schfty)
Endless Options
702 Words
Some suggestions on betting options that could be introduced. A clever idea, but just didn’t quite get there to keep me wanting to read on.
Score 83
thickos
Scapegoats
750 Words
Good reading. All clubs have them don’t they? I can relate this to players in my club.
Score86
Timbo
Dispelling the Myth
750 Words
Well presented piece on the superleague war, and what might have been. I have to say, I wish we still had the Reds, and Rams in the comp, and the point is well made that we really don’t have a national competition despite the name.
Score 87
I Bleed Green
Experience Schmerience.
750 Words
I’ll be watching the Raiders with extra interest next season after reading this. A piece about experience versus youth. Well written
Score 87
Dubby
A prophetic vision of the 21st Century.
748 Words
Excellent reading. A descriptive, and stirring read. Held my interest from start to finish.
Score89
Raiders Total 432
Raiders 432 defeated Lions 427
MOTM Dubby