*gorilla arrogantly struts across the field, condescendingly stroking his authentic tortise-shell comb across his structured hair part and all-the-while stroking a beer-sodden coaster in his back pocket.*
KIWIS
Madunit
Solid connection between ANZAC history and early rugby league identities.
League content good.
Story smoothly delivered but with some disjointedness.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good with some editorial improvements possible sentence structure.
Had some sparkle and emotion.
85
LeagueNut
Nicely constructed scenario of musical theatre expressing the salary cap imbroglio.
Lyrics well constructed and recognisable.
Good league content.
Well constructed and flowing story.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good.
Novel, catchy and tickled my fancy.
86
Willow
Sweetly written conversational post seems a bit unfinished ?
League content good.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good difficult with conversation as a major part of the thread of story.
Left me hanging maybe I missed something but it had something else to say for another 10% worth of marks.
82
byrne_rovelli
Seemingly without breath, this post rolls on to set out recent of Kiwi/Aussie league history.
League content good.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good.
Reads as a one-paced announcement, a little predictable but gets effectively to the end-point.
81
Jesbass
Simply written insight into ANZAC tradition, soldiering and heritage as we generally do not personally understand.
League content limited.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good.
Clear and evocative with personal insights into courage and consideration.
78
KANGAROOS
Amadean
Semi funny roast-style post, mostly humorous insults strung together.
Limited league content.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) OK with some editorial improvements possible.
Nice collection of insulting comments but ultimately not spectacular.
74
Tittoolate
Attractive balance of activity, speech and inner thought to highlight insecurity and personal intention.
League content good.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good with one editorial improvement possible.
Well written, tricky post that was good to read and kept attention focused.
88
Azkatro
Despite my lack of solid statistics qualifications and experience (I do have some.. ) the argument/discussion is compelling and seems well-formed.
League content good.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) OK with some editorial improvements possible some editing of sentence and paragraph structure would have improved it considerably.
Interesting content and moderately well written I was very interested in the facts and the processes.
85
Joshie
Pleasing story about determination, grit and application and final reward through victory.
League content good.
Solid construct of story but a bit jumpy or disjointed in the telling.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) OK, but editorial errors - mainly paragraph and sentence construction, could have improved the telling and the story outcome.
Enjoyed the point of view and personal story.
83
Titanic
Straightforward historical post delivered with style, humour and insight.
League content good.
Admin (spelling, grammar, etc) good.
Pleasant and informative read, interesting without being inspirational.
79
Kiwis (412) defeated Kangaroos (409)
POM: Tittoolate (88)