Poupou Escobar
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What about the random change from third person to second person halfway through? What was that meant to symbolise Pete?
It actually goes from second person to first person.
Incidentally, I recently finished reading a book that was half written in second person flashback. The Damned Utd:
It's quite jarring at first, and even the bits written in first person are weird. But it finished well, for a piece of historical fiction written about real people, some of whom are still alive. It was just f**king weird. That's why I'm sharing this with you, Bigfella.It started that first morning in the hospital, the day after Boxing Day, and it’s never stopped, not for a single day since. You wake up and for those first few seconds, minutes, you forget; forget you are injured; forget you are finished – Forget you will never smell the dressing room again. Never put on a clean new kit. Tie on those shining boots and hear the roar of the crowd –